Where your story breaks
A line-by-line read of your pitch deck, site copy, and whitepapers to find where technical jargon makes buyers drop out.
A Message Audit from a former FBI and Fortune 500 security operator, not a marketing agency guessing at your tech.
I'll email you at within one business day with times for your 20-minute review. Have your deck or site link handy. That's all you need.
A fixed-scope review, typically 1 to 2 months, that finds where your story loses buyers before you spend another quarter pitching it.
A line-by-line read of your pitch deck, site copy, and whitepapers to find where technical jargon makes buyers drop out.
Your architecture translated into plain-English risk framing that non-technical CEOs, CFOs, and board members can check for themselves.
A prioritized, step-by-step list of exactly what to cut, what to clarify, and what your sales team should say in their next meeting.
"We already have a marketing team."
Keep them. They know marketing. I bring the security-operator credibility a briefing doc can't give them.
"We don't have budget for another retainer yet."
The Audit is a fixed scope, not a retainer, and typically runs 1 to 2 months. You decide what's next after you see the findings.
"Our security story is too technical to simplify."
That's the job. Simplifying operator-grade work without losing accuracy is the entire skill set.
"Our resellers already have the deck."
Then test it. Ask one to explain the product in a single sentence. If they can't, the deck isn't doing its job yet.